Eh. It wasn't the best story, nor are you allowed to post content made using "animation creator" software. What I suggest is learning to animate in flash or another program without premade graphics.

Sounds like Power Rangers and every retro game ever on acid. :3
This is epic! I don't know how, but you manage to make every audio submission of yours amazing! That takes a lot of time, effort, courage and good luck to pull off! I'm sure many great things will come your way! With the amount of talent you have, you can get great places in life.
Thank you for inspiring many people to make their own, and having the dedication to be inspired by others.

That's really an amazing gift.